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Re: Black Hole
Thank you! Your honesty is very refreshing, not to mention helpful. I'll get on it! --Anna
Jul 5, 2009 -
Re: Black Hole
I think you're absolutely right! Some change in direction would do this some good. Please, tell me your ideas. What do you think if I started with "Flying harmonies fill ...
Jul 5, 2009 -
Re: Unveiled Truth (temporary title)
This is amazing! I think your characters have grown beautifully. Everything they do is very believable and natural to human instincts. A word I already know the meaning of. It's ...
Jun 20, 2009 -
Re: Kelsie's Song
Hey, thevoiceinside! I love what you've done to it! I think it flows better and sounds more professional now. Sorry I couldn't get here before you gave it to Kelsie, ...
Mar 30, 2009 -
Re: The Desert Needs The Rain
Hey there! This song really hit the spot for me, so thanks! I think you portrayed those feelings well. Nothing else to say but gold star, my friend. Uber gold ...
Mar 8, 2009 -
Re: Alvalor: chapter four
Dream, thanks for the visit! You've made some excellent comments, which I'm going to take back to the drawing board with me. Thank you! 200397, :D I don't think I've ...
Feb 17, 2009 -
Re: Recollecting Melody
Thanks, you guys are the best!! You've pointed out some things that were bothering me, but I couldn't put my finger on them. I'm sure glad I posted this after ...
Dec 29, 2008 -
Re: You Are Loved
Thanks! I'm really more of a free-style poet (as is plenty evident) so this information's great stuff! Thanks again for all your comments! --Anna
Dec 21, 2008 -
Re: Alvalor: part two of chapter three
A few of you have asked about the hyphens. I appologize profusely. See, for some strange reason, the computer sticks them in there randomly after I paste it in from ...
Nov 22, 2008 -
Re: Alvalor
Thanks bunches, KJ! :D --Anna
Nov 13, 2008 -
Re: Halloween with Snoink, Grif, Edward Cullen, and Bulbasaur
*jumps to feet and applauds* I just had to read this out loud to my sister. It was wicked. Wicked awesome. We were rolling. On the floor. --Anna
Oct 25, 2008 -
Re: I Marvel at the Work of Men
A gold star. My sentiments exactly. Well done! --Anna
Sep 29, 2008 -
Re: Alvalor 1.3
Great!! Thanks, guys! I can't wait to get to work! Cyber-five! --Anna
Sep 25, 2008 -
Re: Alvalor
Thanks! Yeah, this wasn't actually meant to be the end of the chapter, but the real chapter is really long. They said that you should probably shorten it to about ...
Sep 15, 2008 -
Re: Midwinter Loss
You know, you're exactly right! I think I will work on another verse. Thanks! --Anna
Sep 6, 2008
